Persuading You to Read a Blog

Sophomores should comment on the freshmen's blogposts for different reasons. The first reason they should comment on their blogposts is because some freshmen aren't use to writing like a high schooler. They need to be aware of the mistakes they are making and if a sophomore points it out then they could fix their mistakes. Also, we sophomores need to help the freshmen become better at their writing and give them critiques and good feedback of their work. By commenting on the freshmens blogpost we sophomores aren't just helping them out or giving them confidence in their work, but we are also learning their points of views. As sophomores we need to start commenting on the freshmens blogspots and aknowledge their work.

Paragraph to Persuade You to Read My Poem

The name of my poem is”Heart!We Will Forget Him” by . I recommend someone to read this poem because the way the writer wrote this poem was interesting because she used personification. An exmple of this is that the person in the poem talks to her heart as if it was a person. If a reader doesn’t like reading about love or forgeting someone then I don’t recommend them to read this poem but at the same time the writers strategy of personification is different. The best part of this poem is the way the writer was able to give the heart a human characteristic.

Persuasive Project Become a Mentor

This is where we made our project:http://www.glogster.com/

First Persuasive Paragraph

Students shouldn’t be allowed to play sports because they need to focus on their school work before they do any extra curricular activity. I believe that if a student doesn’t have good grades then they aren’t trying in school and shouldn’t have the advantage of playing on a team. If a student isn’t allowed to play a sport they will get encouraged to try harder in their academics to get better grades and have a chance to play a sport. By not allowing a student to play a sport, if they don’t have good grades is a benefit for the student because it challenges them and puts them to the test to try harder to achieve a goal.