Tuesday, November 16, 2010

“Catch the Moon” Grief Paragraph.


The change Luis experiences after he address the grief he feels for his mother’s death is believable because he starts to change. At first Luis was a good kid but after his mother passed away he became bad. He started hanging out with the wrong people and the wrong crowd. His so called friends influenced him and he started changing causing him to end up in juvenile hall. A similar situation I’ve experienced was when my mom got deported and I started becoming a bad person and not caring. Like Luis, I ended up in juvenile hall for my mistakes and for hanging out with the wrong crowd. I changed a lot but in the end I realized that I was just hurting myself.

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