Tuesday, November 30, 2010

First Persuasive Paragraph


Students shouldn’t be allowed to play sports because they need to focus on their school work before they do any extra curricular activity. I believe that if a student doesn’t have good grades then they aren’t trying in school and shouldn’t have the advantage of playing on a team. If a student isn’t allowed to play a sport they will get encouraged to try harder in their academics to get better grades and have a chance to play a sport. By not allowing a student to play a sport, if they don’t have good grades is a benefit for the student because it challenges them and puts them to the test to try harder to achieve a goal.

1 comment:

  1. Roomate you write so good and your essay is great keep up the good work.

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