Friday, October 29, 2010

Thursday, October 28, 2010

’The Highwayman’ and ‘Typhoid Fever’ Comparison.”


"The Highwayman" and "Typhoid Fever" are similar because in the story both of the female characters die in the end. They are also similar because in both stories the characters fall in love with each other but they couldn't be together. In "The Highwayman" the characters weren' allowed to talk to each other because of the girls father and in "Typhoid Fever" the characters weren't allowed to talk because of the nuns. In both of the stories the characters fall in love but can't to be together because people won't allow it. It is important that Frank hears the ending of "The Highwayman" because after Patricia died he could relate back to the story since both of the girls die in the end.

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

“Typhoid Fever’– Present Tense Childhood Memory.”


I am five years old and I am having the best time of my life because it’s my birthday and I’m having a party. Many of my family members and friends are here and they are bringing me a lot of presents. My mom’s friend gave me a hamster as a birthday gift and I also got a kitten. I am so excited because I am having a great time and I love all my presents. I am going inside the house and my kitten is outside and when I came back out it got ran over by a car. Then, my hamster got out of the cage and went in the stove and my mom turned the stove on and my hamster died. I am so devastated because now both my pets are dead.

Monday, October 25, 2010

"The Cold Equations’ Marilyn’s Point of View.”


The title of the story is “The Cold Equation” and it is told in third-person limited. The readers only feel and think like Barton because the story is told by his point of view. If the story would have been told by Marylin’s point of view it would be real different. One reason is because if the story was told from Marylin’s point of view we would know how she felt when she was saying her last goodbye’s to her brother and also how she felt when she talked to him. Another reason the story would be different is because we would know and more details would be embedded in the story to tell us how Marylin felt when she realized that she was going to die and never see her family again. The final reason is if it was told by Marylin point of view we would be able to understand what she is thinking and how she is feeling about the whole situation.

Thursday, October 21, 2010

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

“’The Storyteller’ - Memorable Books from My Childhood.”

1. Junie B. Jones and Her Big Fat Mouth by Barbara Park
2. Charlotte’s Web by E.B White
3. Tikki Tikki Tembo retold by Arlene Mosel
4. Where the Wild Things Are by Maurice Sendak
5. No. David! by David Shannon



Tikki Tikki Tembo by Arlene Mosel is one of the books that caught my interest because of the flow it had to it and the rhythm. Tikki Tikki Tembo is about a Chinese lady who name one of her sons Tikki tikki tembo-no sa rembo-chari bari ruchi-pip peri pembo. One day her son Chang falls into a well so Tikki tikki tembo-no sa rembo-chari bari ruchi-pip peri pembo told his mother and she had him tell the old man with a ladder and he saved Chang. However, another day Tikki tikki tembo-no sa rembo-chari bari ruchi-pip peri pembo fell in the well and Chang was trying to tell his mother but he couldn’t get his brothers name right and was struggling. Then when he finally got his brothers name right his mother told him to tell the old man with the ladder to save him. Tikki tikki tembo-no sa rembo-chari bari ruchi-pip peri pembo had been in the well so long after he was taken out that he had to recover and after that Chinese started giving their children short names.

Thursday, October 14, 2010

Chilean Miners Rescue


In San Jose Mine, Chile on August 5, 2010, thirty-three Chilean miners were trapped in a mine with few amounts of food and water. They had no way to get out the mine due to their only opening being blocked by rocks and dirt. They had to wait and share their food and other things with each other for approximately two weeks. After being found they were given supplies and food by a small opening that was made by rescuers. The thirty-three men were trapped in the mine for sixty-nine days until yesterday, Wednesday October 14, 2010 they were rescued and taken to hospitals. Worried is how I would describe my feelings about this situation because nobody ever knows what could or is going to happen to these workers. I was worried not only for the workers but also for their families because they would suffer too if something occurred to their husband, wife, son, or any of their family members. If I was in the miner’s situation I would panic but also try to stay calm and find a way to help all my other co-workers so they could get out safe and go with their families. I would panic because many things could go wrong and sometimes miners aren’t found and are left abandoned, alive with no food or anything to keep us alive.

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

"Autobiographical Narrative Reflection.”


When it comes to writing I can do a great job only if I try and put effort into it. On my Autobiographical Narrative I wrote about my experience in Juvenile Hall and how miserable it was. I wrote on how I felt at the time at that time and all the emotions that were going through me. I also did well at giving details and describing how people and the place looked. The last thing I did well at was put myself back at the time of my horrible experience. I didn’t do that well on this paper because I felt like one week isn’t enough to write a narrative that will earn above grade level. I also procrastinated because I wasn’t going to write it because I felt like I wasn’t going to get a good grade. The last thing I will do different on my next paper is brainstorm and give full details. On my next paper I will put forth effort into writing it to earn above grade level.

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

TV Show Plot Summary


On the iCarly show “I Have a Love Sick Teacher” Freddie, Carly, and Sam’s teacher is treating their class unfairly because she got dumped. The teacher freaks out when she feels that Carly is not listening to her and Spencer, Carly’s brother is called in for a teacher meeting. When Spencer and the teacher meet they realized they liked each other and started dating. He then realized that she teacher was very needy and sumps her so she starts to be abusive to the class again. Carly made a show on her iCarly show “make up or break up” so people could vote. After they saw it was a non-win situation the gang got rid of the teacher by having her arrested for illegal downloading.

"Autobiographical Narrative Prewriting Form."

Sunday, October 3, 2010

My Memorable Days


1. When I was three years old, my mom and dad got in a fight in the street and broke up.
2. At the age of four, my mom met my step dad at a bar and they got together.
3. When I turn five, my family was together for my birthday.
4. When I was eleven, my mom got deported back to Mexico.
5. At the age of twelve, I went to juvenile hall.
6. When I was fourteen I saw my mom again in T.J after a year that I hadn’t seen her.
7. At thirteen I came to SPA.
8. At thirteen, I also met my best friend Becky in SPA.
9. At fifteen I got in a huge fight with my sister over my ex-boyfriend.
10. When I was seven, my brother got burned on his hand while playing in the kitchen.