Wednesday, February 16, 2011

SPA Poem


I am here because I cannot be suppoted by my dad or my mama,

so now I have to go through the stress and all the drama

Surrounded by potential and surrounded by trees

the adults are knowledgable statues here just for me

the statues will talk the statues will help

they are there when I need them like when I'm having bad health

to me they are like bombs waiting to blow

waiting for the day that I graduate and go


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6 comments:

  1. YayaFebruary 16, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    I like your poem. It is very good. Nice job on doing your homework.

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  2. JosephFebruary 17, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    Great poem, but make sure you spell check before publishing.

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  3. Marcus's BlogFebruary 17, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    Good job on your poem Amy! This is one of the best I've seen! Great job! Haha ;)

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  4. HeatherFebruary 17, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    Amy, great poem! Did you get help?

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  5. Augustine's BlogFebruary 17, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    Amy, I like your poem. You did awesome.

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  6. KivonLFebruary 17, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    This poem is really good and great job Roomate.

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